I'm on the bus back to Coquitlam station after leaving Chaos a bit earlier then planned (A hang-out type deal got pushed back till tomorrow) and I met a friend and a comedy writer named Mason on board the #169. I knew him in high school and we do the old song and dance of "Oh hey, what's going on?" type deal and he said he's working on a movie script. I told him to give me the pitch, he didn't know what the pitch was as he poorly executed it.

Seriously, all my stories--even the really crappy stories I can pitch in under a minute. It's like a writer's resume, it's a science and an art. If a writer doesn't have a good pitch then it's like having a really crappy resume.

So back to this guy, to be far. I have had my idea as a cliche and horrible ideas in the past. However when someone criticizes it I retort but I don't insult the person... That's what happened Friday, the artist was criticizing my story only too get the feeling that I understand what I am doing and my goal for the story.

So, this was the person's idea.

Essentially it is a "Black Superhero/Comedy/Action" movie script that focuses on Character A, B, C (He calls them guy, girl and friend)

Character's A father is a famous superhero that was killed when Character A was very young on public television. For some reason Character A grows up with superpowers (Earth-like powers, was never explained what) and decideds not to be a superhero. Meanwhile Character C is a friend of Character A and tries to tell him that he needs to be a superhero cause of his power. Character C always wanted to be a superhero. Then Character B (Girl) comes into the scene with Rock Superpowers (Controlling rocks via psychic link) and Character A has a crush on her while Character C (The Non-Superpower one) teaches her how to use her super powers. After watching her and learning about her Character C does sciencetific expiraments on Character B and becomes a Supervillian who... CONTROLS EARTH Power things! Character C is now a badguy, Character B tries to stop him but almost gets herself killed then Character A kills Character C and Character A becomes a hero....

Pretty bad, I thought... And how he explained it was a tad worse then how I typed it due to all the likes and buts. We then dicuss what I'm doing and I mention I'm trying to become a writer and working on a few projects and he asked me my opinion on the script. I gave him a numerious reasons why it won't work and what needs to be changed but he didn't listen to me :(. I told him I've seen Fan-Fiction that had better writing about lesbians in it then his plot. Right off the bat, not being a comic book geek of course this comes off of my mind:

1. Not another superhero movie.
2. Why do they have Earth Powers? (Apperantly he says that it's easier to do in CGI >.>)
3. If Character C was that smart in Science.....(Insert whatever here)
4. What does A turn back to be a superhero after saving one person.
5. Doesn't fit the genre. (Black comedy)

He took it like I was insulting him and left for work. I shrugged it off.
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In other news my Anarchist Brujah like Character in EoE now has a status of Three!

I am now Acknowledged, Vailent, and Just!

I'm still :(, as the Toredore are trying to take my status away because they don't see how awesome my character is at saving their asses. By saving their asses I mean pull one of the characters into the line of fire of an enemy and use them as a meat shield as opposed to them breaking the masquerade. The Treimere are annoyed with me because I'm rising to fast in the ranks at god like speed. Not to metnion my status no brings the Brujah to Rival in the Clan standings, only opposed to the Gangreals.
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I had a breakdown of "OMFG I"M UGLY" today on the skytrain and earlier because I feel so exhausted and so forth and of course the whole no dating thing is wierd and..blah blah blah. I should get going and study so I'm not a worry wart all day tomorrow when hanging out and so forth.

Finally, one last question:

It’s clear that writing changes my mood, especially with the tone of the piece. I’m thinking about experimenting with this somehow.

Anyways, I have this great idea for a comic/tv series. It might sound unoriginal at first but I swear it is full of awesomeness. Basically it’s a Mobster like TV show/comic like The Black Donnellys meets Vampire lore. Basically I was going to have a “mob” family of vampires move into a city, they’ll fight the local gangs for power and fend off between themselves (power struggles), slayers, other paranormals and other gangs. I think it would be interesting. I had a few characters thought up for the idea. Also, the family’s name would be “Blood” so they are referred to the “family of Blood.” But yeah, character samples:

Michael Blood: Next in line for the role as “father” in the Family of Blood. Although he doesn’t want take part in the whole thing that the family has turn into. So basically he’s the loner/outcast and protagonist of the whole thing.

Anyways, just I thought that it would be cool.

I just watched Death Note Two this evening and holy shit it is an awesome movie! I love the death gods soooo much, they are awesome and the self destruction of Light was amazing! Bah, although I wish something different happened with “L” though.

I wrote a 600 page paper on why I hate adaptations of Shakespeare that are unoriginal and more confusing than the original. An example of this is a play called “A Macbeth” it’s Macbeth but focuses on Witches, Everyone except for Macbeth are female and Macbeth has split personalities. It was really confusing and I was waiting for something to explain everything.

I hate it when people who tell you they’ll be right back and don’t return. I’m going to start not taking people’s word for shit.

Resident Evil Umbrella Chronicles is an amazing video game. Very fun, killing zombies is always fun though.

I was planning to see Beowulf Sunday but I’m unsure if I will. I mean I’m just going to bed right now and such soooo yeah.

Stars is an awesome band.

Night one of "Ask everyone for ID...." is doing pretty well. Here's some quick stats.

- 3 Customers told me to Fuck off and left without purchasing there stuff.
- 4 Customers complained.
- 1 Took the Managers card
- 1 threatened me.
A few others actually tipped me.

Yes I made 2.45 in tips today! I also got asked to hand in a resume to Eagle Ridge Movie Theaters cause the person who came up to get smokes loved my vigilance. She told me to drop by at Eagle Rdge Theaters Sunday and see a man named David. The job is only 2 days in a week 4/5 hours shifts each so what I may do if I do decide to leave here is that I would work with my dad part time and then work at the theaters then take Fri/Sat off... Or attempt to. :) I'm not sure yet though. Depends how the next few days are gonna go at work. The main reason why i'm considering the Movie job is that I could get into movies with a friend for FREE, unlimited amount of times also. (I asked the person). So just seeing free movies at the 14 dollar theater is pretty sweet deal! Alas though I would have to work with my dad >.> Although my dad did ask my this.

"Would you rather bust your ass when you work your morning shifts with your boss? OR would you rather bust your ass for me and help out the family?" Family, easy as that.

Again i'm only pondering, depending on the what's gonna happen at work and such. Grrr...

See Dan has quit yet there is no Now Hiring sign up. What the hell? Oh well.

Oh since i'm the person with good news and such!

Jessica can't work Tuesday Morning, she has to go to school for I Week. Oh noes.
Only Saturday Shift and i'm off till Wensday =D.

Listening to Blutengel's Angel Dust. My favorite track by far would have to be Black wedding.

*Yawns and sighs* I'm bored, bored, bored and more bored. It's 4:30 right now, 30 more minutes till I open the door. It's like really fucking windy out right now. I'm surprise the power isn't out. >.> I like it when it's windy and raining.

In let's see how smart Kris is.. I wanted to clean my keyboard on my labtop and I started at F12. I popped it right open and well... yeah.. I broke the F12 key. However I did superglue it back on and it seems to work... Besides who uses F12? Actually it's just as new.. I think >.> Errr.. last time I try to clean the labtop! I better go and head out.. Hurr *Presses F12 ten times*

Hello Internet, i'm here to talk to you.

The email I sent to google has have a reply! It says "If you have any complaints please post on our forum". I guess bots don't fucking have a sense of humour eh? Oh well, I'm still tempted to print it out and actually physically mail them the letter to see if someone would actually give me a response to it. That would be priceless.

Are you into swing music? Are you into Nazis? Then I have a deal for you! Yes I do, I have found a website with NAZI SWING music from the 30s. Yes indeed, and as a bonus they are in MP3 file format yes Download them now!

In wierd and Morbid news, there is a livejournal community called myspace_deaths out here in Livejournal. It is about people who died on Myspace.. it's actually pretty fun to look at... But it's wierd cause it's myspace but on Livejournal.. I told the guy to make a Livejournal Deaths on a myspace profile.... Nothing yet.

There is a show in Canada called.. "Canada's worst driver" Now this is sad cause it's showing that Canadian Television shows are just as bad as American shows.... *sighs* I miss the days of good and decent Television...wait I don't watch the god box.

For several days now i've been reading Bash.org once again. One of the best sites on the internet.

Last night I saw Fantastic Four. Let's just say I liked it better then the Hulk... Speaking of which inless you've been living undearneath a fucking rock i'm assumeing some people might have seen the new X-men 3 Trailer, no? Well of course the reason why i'm excited cause my Favorite marvel character is gonna be in it! Yes indeed Angel.. well.. I like Archangel.. but Angel is cool.. I can't wait to see him as Archangel in the future though!

So atlast after looking for the trailer to post on my trailer I saw somthing where I almost orgasimed once seeing the title. Yes that's right UNDERWORLD TWO! OMFG

Also in FUCK YOU PSP news, Reports have come in for November where the Nintendo DS and the GBA have both single handedly beated PSP in Sales for November. HA!

Ok i'm gonna go, She's online now. I must talk and bicker with her.

Let's all go to compton and yell out "MY NIGGA" to black people. It will be great.